

However, if one were to propose an alternative ending, it could shift toward a more transformative resolution—one that still retains Soyinka’s critical tone but offers a clearer path toward reconciliation and renewal.
Alternative Ending Proposal: A Ritual of Purification and Reconciliation
At the centre of the stage, a sacred fire is lit, representing both destruction and renewal. The Forest Head speaks again, but this time, rather than merely forewarning of continued cycles of failure, he offers the mortals a choice: they may either ignore the lessons of history and continue on their self-destructive path, or they may actively engage in a ritual of purification—one that requires true sacrifice.
1. Demoke’s Redemption:
In this alternative ending, Demoke, the tortured artist, takes on a more central role in leading the reconciliation process. He confesses his own failures—not only his guilt over the death of Oremole but also his deeper fear of embracing true artistic and spiritual responsibility. He acknowledges that his carving of the totem was not just an act of personal artistry but a mirror of the moral decay in society. Instead of being passive, he accepts a higher calling as a voice of conscience, committing to use his art as a tool for healing rather than ego or destruction.
2. Rola’s Transformation:
Rola, the courtesan, is confronted by the Dead Woman, who forces her to see the deeper consequences of her past choices—not merely in terms of personal guilt but in the way that individual moral failures contribute to collective social decay. In a moment of catharsis, Rola rejects her former identity as the temptress and symbol of exploitation and chooses a path of self-reform. This transformation is symbolized by her decision to anoint herself with sacred water from the Forest, marking a rebirth.
3. The Council of Elders’ Revelation:
The political figures, who have throughout the play remained somewhat detached from the deeper spiritual struggle, are compelled by the spirits to participate in the ritual. They are shown visions of the future—a Nigeria that will crumble under corruption and tribalism if they do not change their ways. Unlike the original ending, where their ignorance seems destined to continue, this alternative resolution forces them to kneel before the Forest Head and pledge themselves to a new code of ethical leadership. Their oaths are witnessed by both the spirits and the common people, binding them to an ancestral contract of integrity.
4. The Forest’s Blessing:
In the climactic moment, the Forest Head, seeing that at least some among the living have chosen self-awareness over denial, grants them a blessing: the forest will not completely retreat from human affairs but will remain a guiding presence. The spirits do not vanish in bitterness; instead, they transform into symbols of wisdom, present in nature and human conscience alike. The Dead Man and Dead Woman satisfied that their suffering has not been ignored, fades into the sacred fire, now becoming part of the ancestral spirit of the land.
Final Scene: The Dance of Renewal
The play concludes not with an air of lingering doom but with a dance—not the fragmented, discordant movements of the past, but a new dance of unity. The people, led by Demoke, Rola, and the reformed elders, engage in a ritualistic movement that symbolizes a fresh start. The drums, previously chaotic and ominous, now play a rhythmic harmony that suggests a tenuous but real hope.
As the stage darkens, the final image is that of a young child, unnoticed before, stepping forward and placing a hand on the totem that Demoke has carved. This silent gesture implies that the next generation, too, will inherit the lessons of history, but with the possibility of wisdom rather than blindness.
Conclusion: Why Is This Alternative Ending?
This proposed alternative ending does not remove Soyinka’s critique of history and human folly, but it offers a greater sense of agency and transformation. Instead of leaving the audience with an overwhelming sense of inevitable failure, it provides a path toward change, however difficult it may be. It acknowledges that while the cycle of history is powerful, individuals and societies can still make conscious choices that alter their trajectory.
Would this ending align with Soyinka’s vision? Perhaps not entirely, as he was deeply sceptical of easy resolutions. However, by emphasizing ritual, self-awareness, and responsibility, it remains faithful to the play’s Yoruba influences while offering a slightly more hopeful vision for post-independence Nigeria—one in which confronting the past does not merely reveal ghosts but also opens doors to redemption.
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